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3829523 No.54288   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?ig6y6g4lc4s3r70

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>> No.57508  
>Are they? I numbered them according to page numbers on the scans.

Looks like my mind was just playing tricks on me, so no worries.

Just a few quick things:
Pg. 09, probably don't have to mention it, but there's a typo: it's Cirno, not CIrno.

On Pg. 27, it'd be better to shorten it to, "Decide for yourself" instead of "Decide it for yourself."
And last typo: it should be "jealous," not "jealos."

Other than that, everything looks good.

>> No.57560  
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>>57508
Thank you! Everything's fixed now.
I don't think I've mentioned it, but Ean's not going to edit this one, so...

Editor-kun, come back~

>> No.57844  

Bump?

>> No.58366  

I've been away for quite some time. But, anyway, I'm back now. :) I can edit this. However, I'm quite confused, how come the script starts with page 3???

>> No.58368  

>>58366
You're fine, looks like it's just going by the printed page number, not the file.



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1044318 No.58346   [Reply]

Well, don't see it here.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/cu11qu6ur7vme7d/

>> No.58347  
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and the script. Please qc and edit.
Any one can think of better book name in English?

>> No.58348  

"Overflowing, blooming" perhaps?

>> No.58367  
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Here's the QC.



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937713 No.58364   [Reply]

https://www.mediafire.com/?2jhe0bo4bjpsrjn



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412668 No.58317   [Reply]

Took longer than I wanted, but here it is.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/nn668u9rr6m3zuf/WHH15.rar

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>> No.58350  
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>>58329
Thanks Nietz.

Could I also get sfx for pages 17 at the bottom.

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27
The big sfx here too.

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527531

...and the title on the extra page. (It's in an easy spot)

In typical fashion, the extra page requires the most work.

>> No.58361  

>>58350
[shiny shiny]

>>58351
This one's harder, something like being taken aback, or doing a double take, but I'm not sure how to translate.

>>58352
Wild and Horned Hermit ③
Afterword!

>> No.58362  

>>58361
Got it.

zip
http://www.mediafire.com/download/wxtw54ykfqrmxxd/Aya_Azuma_and_ZUN_-_Wild_and_Horned_Hermit_CH15.zip



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159274 No.58359   [Reply]

Danbooru pool: http://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/3318
Done: https://mega.co.nz/#!2IATlAjR!6YcA206iukl7D3Y1cGjoBPYUHftwaEPGC90cwT2DbrM
Some pages that are different with pixiv: https://mega.co.nz/#!aVZGxCAA!Pw-QNWOb2ihLy2J3XPXCJxMExMIG531apn6hqhz3fpU



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1881234 No.55964   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?tc19k51rp96fktt

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>> No.58249  
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Plan to do it for a while too.
Please QC and edit.

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Here's some QC, though I'm a little shaky on some parts.

>> No.58271  

Pg. 19:
[2]
Kanako:
無茶 = unreasonable, excessive, rash

From other Mental Apricot works and a suwako suggestive lick, So I guess she mean
"Don't you think, because you doing (18+) too rough, so I feel awake instead of sleepy. (thus go drink sake(lie))

>> No.58303  

Pg. 19:
[2]
Kanako: ...it was because you were so unreasonable
that I couldn't sleep, wasn't it?

>> No.58358  

I did the last mental apricot, I'll do this one too. Thanks for the translation & QC!! Edit will be done within a week.



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5237479 No.57343   [Reply]

https://mega.co.nz/#!54gTiCwQ!KtUjjDewZbmhm3Xr4n5n372VuOXl9Eqb_ueY_mg7xO0

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>> No.58260  
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Relation Valley 1
I'll do all the postscripts soon.

>> No.58263  

I accidentally reversed pg15 & 16. Also, pg12-18 are totally overlevelled (damn), might be a better idea to use the existing scans' respective pages for editing. Here's the DL link: https://mega.co.nz/#!1kQRmYpA!Wm9V0Wr91K99jeIfk8Q8XdDyu7xykBBF2SO2YLsn6AE

Pg24 (first 3 panels) - I think the dialogue has shifted back to between Marisa and Alice, hence the different font from previous pages.

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Updated with the afterwords and fixing the mistake that Deruaz spotted, QC welcome.

>> No.58314  

The garbled Japanese text in one of the afterwords is 「名月をとってくれろと泣く子かな」.

>> No.58357  
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Here's the QC. I think using "top and bottom" works better than "S and M," because the connotations are really different.



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1798403 No.55950   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?z6szdaahyr704s4

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>> No.58328  
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I was a little confused on I think page 14 about Kaguya's "profound eyes," so I made a note there.

>> No.58333  

Actually it's p15
深い瞳
深い = deep/depthful
瞳 = pupil (eye)/eye
Sort of deep (with knowledge) eye, I guess.

>> No.58335  

Here the fixs.

Also for consistant please don't archieved this book or other in the series yet, until all 4 books is complete.
In case, there's a need to fix some mistranslation after I translated later volume.

p15
[2]
焼き付く burn/ searing in memory
It's like "after see Kaguya, Kaguya image never left her eye.

p16
[5]
a : Yes......it is. And they said, Fuhito-sama is perhaps......

[6]

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>> No.58337  

Yeah, I somehow marked two pages as pg. 14.

Pg. 15:
[2]
It's just those piercing eyes, that pure white skin...
And that jet black hair that reflects the light of the moon that are burned into my sight.

Pg. 16:
[5]
a: Yes, it is... After all, they said Fuhito-sama...
[6]
a: had caught a disease.

Pg. 37:
[1]

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>> No.58355  

The previous comment was from me, by the way. Don't know why it didn't post my name along with it.



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1567692 No.58030   [Reply]

https://www.mediafire.com/?9os0yl7f7ef1y4x

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>> No.58301  

>>58268
Thanks!
Done: https://mega.co.nz/#!6VJRBJJT!I8wyuMI5tjdDnxAcqHmQkaEQLyQuCfaU92f_238I9uA

>> No.58306  

Archived.
http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Cacao_Factory#Heart_Beat.21_.282014-05-11.29

>> No.58334  
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2360881

"the two of are you pretty late"

should be "the two of you are pretty late"

>> No.58345  

>>58334
Thanks!
Updated pages: https://mega.co.nz/#!2d4niJ7a!rYbp7OGnctL9bJZW2PFExCHQpKX2hx21LktbCgzyix8

>> No.58349  

OK, updated.



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1280422 No.58294   [Reply]

I don't sure I already up or not, but I couldn't find it here. So here.

https://www.mediafire.com/?e6ovqk8p66k36vh

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>> No.58332  

Was pretty easy to edit. Nice way to get back into the groove of things.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/yc484kxec3qbr6u/%5BRed+Vanilla%5D+Boundary+Between+Spring+and+Summer.rar

As always, any mistakes or the like, let me know and I'll change 'em.

>> No.58338  

Just two things:

Pg. 11
[1]
Box: (I think she means "A rainbow.")

Pg. 14:
[1]
Marisa: (It should be "plums," not "plumbs."

>> No.58339  

Pg. 11
Er, why do you think it mean rainbow?

box said 雨の境界
雨 = rain
境界 = border/boundary

Rainbow = レインボー / 虹

Some time rain don't so "transit" smoothly.
I met that sort of area once, where in that area there is no rain, the road is dry but pass the boundary it's is heavy rain.

>> No.58342  

I agree with Arcrenciel. Everything that I can find regarding to 雨の境界 does translate to "Boundary/Boarder of rain". Personally though, it doesn't really sound right. I'm not exactly good at translating Japanese to English so I don't know if there's a better way to put 雨の境界. I'm open to suggestions, but for now I'll keep it as is.

Here's the updated file:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/oc5dpq1lvic59zj/%5BRed+Vanilla%5D+Boundary+Between+Spring+and+Summer.rar

>> No.58343  

I hadn't heard of a rain boundary before, which is why I thought it sounded strange. But at the same time, her just saying that it was a rainbow also seems a little off. I just wanted to make sure it really was "Rain boundary."



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