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1629435 No.58280   [Reply]

A 1st volume of side story of the Mokou book by DELI-TRE that I translated.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/q62nuw3b2se55ms/

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>> No.58583  

For that part, you probably don't want to use "even" so close together. It could work as:
"...even Lunarians wouldn't think of it."

>> No.58694  

Another change for consistent

p16
[3]
Fuhito : Yes, there are lots of jobs for you,

Please change "jobs" to "works"

>> No.58734  

Pg. 16:
[3]
Fuhito: There is a lot of work for you,

>> No.60423  

I'm editing this.

>> No.60457  

Here is the edit for QC
http://www.mediafire.com/file/jdkoeona167isdf



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1634285 No.60455   [Reply]

It's sure late for the season.
https://www.mediafire.com/?tlwawjn81lc1ct5

>> No.60456  
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And script for QC and edit.



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1033731 No.54336   [Reply]

http://www.sendspace.com/file/i7p1iq
You know you want to see this one translated!

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>> No.60409  

Merry Christmas everyone!
Sorry it took so long, but it's basically finished. Two questions:

1) Page 28 is missing in the archive. Does anyone still have a copy of it?

2) On Page 30 in the last panel
「人を呪わば穴二つ」
has been left untranslated. It's like "If you hurt others, you might eventually get harmed". What's the proper way to say this? Harm set, harm get?

>> No.60410  

Regarding page 30, weblio says it's:
People [Those] who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones.

Since it's a machine translation it's more like engrish than English, but it should give you a general idea what you're looking for.

There are also a few more there.
Here's the link:
http://ejje.weblio.jp/content/%E4%BA%BA%E3%82%92%E5%91%AA%E3%82%8F%E3%81%B0%E7%A9%B4%E4%BA%8C%E3%81%A4

>> No.60412  
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>>60409
Is this the page?

>> No.60414  

@natural-log: Yes that's the one, thanks!
@Izur: Thanks, I took a literal translation but added a note in the credits with some examples.
Here is the edited archive
http://www.mediafire.com/file/yf2tsmgy1l5o7iv

>> No.60454  

Archived.
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Fuantei#TENGUOVER_.282013-05-13.29



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1555721 No.59613   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/download/bli54ajh4662iw2/

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>> No.60419  

Here's the edited version:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/1wf8m1ngvjj6inn/MPR_Eng.zip

I skipped the SFX because they're contextual, so it's easy to guess what they mean and they have little to no impact on the story itself.

The script is in American English. I'm sure the people created the translation know that, so this is more like useless data. :P

As for the changes that I made:

p8[2]Reimu: Alright.
=> Small bubble, so I used the full form "All right".

p13[5]Reimu: ...Youkai who only go into the human village on foot are rare, you know.
=> Replaced "into" with "to".

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>> No.60426  

Just a few things,
Pg. 19, change "scoop" to "scoops" in the Aya's and Momiji's lines. Also, move the comma into the quotations.
Pg. 27, it should still be "take your picture," since she's talking about the action of snapping a photograph as opposed to picking up physical copies. English is weird like that.

Both aside from those two spots, everything looks good. Thanks for catching those other areas, too.

>> No.60427  
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New page 19.

>> No.60428  
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And 27 as well.

>> No.60450  

Archived.
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Ordinary_Restaurant#My_Perspective_Records_.282010-08-14.29



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612238 No.60334   [Reply]

As usual.
https://www.mediafire.com/?htesrwwoobf9c3k

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>> No.60369  

Could I ask for a change? Looking at it, I was thinking...
Pg. 18.3
Aya: "I can make progress on my work no matter where I am."
That's the only part that I think needs a correction.

>> No.60370  

http://www.mediafire.com/file/hfvo8akrx4vg275/_018.zip

Done.

>> No.60436  

Just a small correction on page 9:
"if it's just little" -> "if it's just a little"

I will use the same credits page as >>60432 for this one as well.

>> No.60437  
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Just a little change on page 9.

Also, I somehow managed to create one credits page to fit all the stories :P

>> No.60449  

Archived.
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Panic_Puppet!#Love_never_changes.2C_either_.282016-08-13.29



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1358952 No.60339   [Reply]

https://www.mediafire.com/?61kpkouq422q3rv

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>> No.60379  

Here's the new page 13.
http://www.mediafire.com/file/djwwhgb9uh7ur7h/_013.zip

>> No.60382  

Thanks for all your hard work. Everything looks good to me, though I suppose we'll need a credits page to archive it.

>> No.60383  

You can make one yourself, or, if you let me know what exactly it has to contain, then I should be able to make one.

>> No.60435  

The one like you did in >>60432 is fine.
In fact, since it's even the same people involved, I will just include that same one when archiving later.

>> No.60448  

Archived.
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/DYNAMO#Corn_Salad_Hair_.282015-08-14.29



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2920622 No.47273   [Reply]

(C80)[Cake House] Indigo inherit (Circle Name May Need Correcting)
Nice Art.

http://www.mediafire.com/?63360uo7p6g5k05

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The new page 24, I went with:
"When you study how to put up a barrier you become aware of what can happen to your body..."

>> No.60418  
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And a minor change on page 25. In the last bubble "feeling is" was changed to "feeling was" since the previous bubble was also in past simple.

>> No.60430  

Just needs a credits page, or maybe add the credits in a corner of p. 31.

You can use this template:
Gaku-Gaku Animal Land
Touhou Branch

Translation:
Edit:
Special Thanks: [if any]

www.gensokyo.org
en.touhouwiki.net
voile.gensokyo.org

Or the short template:

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>> No.60432  
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23952

It's nothing sophisticated, but maybe it will suffice.

>> No.60447  

Archived.
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Senbei_Shop#Indigo_Inherit_.282011-08-13.29



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1931411 No.59224   [Reply]

it's Personal Color!
https://www.mediafire.com/?43fd6wakin9t5h3

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>> No.60411  

My version,
http://www.mediafire.com/file/6c4jers49g10z3c/Personal_Color_-_The_Book-moving_of_Wonderland.zip

Izur, I used most of your fix. I hope you don't mind. Up for further QC and stuff

>> No.60413  

>>60411
If that's of any use to you then I don't mind at all.

>> No.60438  

Just a small fix on page 27:
"I have never ask my mother" -> "I have never asked my mother"

>> No.60439  
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Pg 27

The link here >>60411 should be updated by now.

>> No.60446  

Archived.
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Personal_Color#The_Book-moving_of_Wonderland_.282014-12-29.29



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744984 No.60169   [Reply]

https://mega.nz/#!TIdA0CzR!S04nZ2TrwlDU0uAbIE2tGSQRdq-NmvpDXamyi8hLQTw

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>> No.60375  
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It worked this time. The internet sure is the internet.

Here are a few spots I think could use some edits. Let me know what you think.

>> No.60377  

>>60375
Thanks for checking it out and spotting those. I'll fix those up once I get a chance.

>> No.60387  

I put in those fixes. Thanks for looking this over.
https://mega.nz/#!bcUFFS7Q!4vnwJEenQ-a_rvYj8ufnvrfyI27crbW2krErERgmMjk

>> No.60431  

Definitely needs some more leveling on the blacks. Try making a black smear with the brush on one of the black backgrounds, then adjust the levels so it's not noticeable anymore.

Font size could be smaller too, it's okay to leave some more white space in the balloons, as well more space between the lines. You don't necessarily have to change it all here, just something to keep in mind for the next edits.

Minoriko's font in page 11 could be different, though. Maybe Bradley Hand, Journal, or something similar.

  • On page 9: "Isn't this is different" -> "Isn't this different"
  • page 20: "from fairy tale" -> "from fairy tales"
  • page 26: there's an unerased bit in the last word box.

Also for the credits, you should use a template like the ones in >>60430, or in one of the released doujins.

>> No.60445  

I've been procrastinating with this, but it should be fixed up now. I'm sticking with the unleveled blacks overall since I like the aesthetic for it. Other doujins that I typeset will potentially be resized and respaced once I give them more time and attention.

https://mega.nz/#!iBd0zaba!MzeDXL3cyuXiFmfQzZvOC8CRaBmMuZP95jYRAKw-d2g



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463168 No.60444   [Reply]

https://mega.nz/#!fJFV3CJJ!wU-kIlg-iT-4e4ESlEdi0v6XAvu8Ua-hXxsth55iemU



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