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Title/circle may need correction.

>> No.48560  

bump :D

>> No.59499  

Link error.
Mediafire says it has been deleted.

>> No.59503  

Welp, it was on GE. Here you got: http://www.mediafire.com/download/tu13jn7w8ukb880/

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1273808 No.59461   [Reply]

I kind of took back translating and editing FS, so here's a first draft of chapter 3. Haven't finished all the SFX, but putting it up for any QC.


>> No.59488  

Pg08 [7] - It has do to with that... > It has to do with that...
Pg19 [1] - Will you explain me... > add "to"
Pg19 [4] - You saw through to its... > remove "to"
Pg23 [1] - The extermination efforts ran went well into the night. > remove "ran"

>> No.59496  

Here is the more or less finished version, though I might add a few SFX edits before archiving.

>> No.59501  


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959885 No.54294   [Reply]

Edit reserved.

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>> No.59479  

These looks really nice, but there's something I'd like to ask:
Why are you using the lower quality scans for the hardsubbed pages?

>> No.59480  

It's archived.
By Zounose standards, that was a very happy end.

>> No.59485  

Which pages?

>> No.59486  

Page 8, 10, 12, 14... pretty much the even pages.
You can see visible fold marks and lines, most prominently on the upper half of each pages.

The version that natural-log linked at the beginning of this thread has none of those.

>> No.59487  

Oops! I didn't know about that. I should cross-check every scan next time. My bad.

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3900631 No.59462   [Reply]

Hello, voile folks.

I was wondering if some of you might still have the Japanese raw for this doujinshi. Our team want to translate it into another language, but since we can't find it on internet, (we only found the former part with not so good quality) we ask if some of you might still have it and share it with us.

Sorry if we should be asking it somewhere else, because there's no raw provider mentioned in your credit page.

Thanks in advance for replying to this thread~

>> No.59467  

Well, this isn't exactly the place for asking that, but here you go if you haven't found them yet.
(C74) (同人誌) [VISIONNERZ] 少女幻葬 前後編 (東方)

>> No.59468  
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do you have the former part too? with better quality than this one

>> No.59469  

It's actually that small?
少女幻葬 前編 │ドロップブックス

>> No.59470  

it's just 750px in height after I downloaded it

>> No.59484  

Visionnerz! Back when I re-TLed this I couldn't find the first part either, so the only thing I could do was re-edit the already translated pages.

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>> No.56800  

Bump for translation

>> No.59472  

QC please.

>> No.59475  
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Here's some QC to make everything flow more smoothly and sound more natural. Let me know if there are any problem areas.

As a side note, this is one of the darker works I've worked on.

>> No.59476  

Updated pages: https://mega.co.nz/#!GFgWCQDC!mUpLq_wyfCqGvLkNoB3vDRcNrwCgADSg1U8YnqiPu8Y

>> No.59482  


Gee, talk about dark. Gotta remember to put some warnings on the nest update post as well.

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371229 No.59363   [Reply]

Don't see it here yet.

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>> No.59460  

Ack, missed a couple things when I looked over it the last time. Just two, though.

First, one page 16 in the second panel, it says "whoos" instead of "whoosh."

Second, on page 30, on the bottom right it should be, "[...] watch stars for the first time in many years?" instead of "for first time in many years."

And that should be it. I should have pointed these two out last time, but I blame my tiny screen for missing them.

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>> No.59465  

Okay, looks good. Thanks for your hard work.

>> No.59481  


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1247982 No.59421   [Reply]

I don't think it's here yet.

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>> No.59440  

Yes it should be steeping.

>> No.59452  
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I changed the QC so that "seep" is now "steep." I'm still a little iffy on the afterword on page 25, specifically this part:
Pg. 25
To eat is to live, and living on is strongly tied to life.

It just sounds really weird, you know?

>> No.59454  

The best I can come up with is something like "Eating is strongly tied to living [and being alive]." The weirdness might come from the author using two words for living, one with the meaning of being alive, the other more like living in a house.

>> No.59455  

How about seperate to 2 sentence

so it's become (with adition eating word)
To eat is to live. Eating is strongly tied to living.

original text
食べることは、暮らすこと、 生きることに強く結びついています

>> No.59458  

That could work. It would also work as:
To eat is to live, so eating is strongly tied to living. (To "[...] tied to being alive."

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>> No.59382  
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Well here is the script please check and QC.

>> No.59447  
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Here's the QC. I think it could use a quick review just to make sure everything's solid.

>> No.59448  

Eiki: Because visiting to hold important talks is also an important duty.

Sorry after check again 直接お話を伺うのも大事な業務ですから should be :

Eiki: Because it's an important duties to hear a story directly. <sort of talking face to face is important thing, as you can hear story unalter and show your sincere I think>

Pg. 07
Eiki: This girl is surprisingly knowledgeable of the world...!!! How unexpected...

Just note about "knowledgeable of the world" Kanji is :
耳年増 (みみどしま) : (n) young woman with a lot of superficial knowledge about sex, etc.

>> No.59450  

Pg. 06
Eiki: Because it's important to have this kind of talk directly.

This should work for this line. It's good you brought it up, because I accidentally used "important" twice.

Pg. 07
Eiki: This girl, such worldly knowledge...!!! How unexpected...

There unfortunately isn't a word for that in English, but this will get the point across a lot better.

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