Title: Fla-Pan
>>19073
It's only 10% pantsu. The rest is characters, story, act (shot by Arsen)

>>19159
Wow now this one looks like a bitch to translate. boom Whoops, left my sarcasmeter on.

If this ever gets translated I'll do this one too, so reserved. Why? Meh, I chose a random page in the backlogs and felt like it.

here the translation, also translation of effect like my other works. Please check and edit

no one edit this one?

>>47763
As I know, nope. Wanna edit this one?

Do a self recheck and perhaps combine with the checked one.

Those who want to edit this one, please wait.

Here is the revision. The meaning should be correct now.

>>47613

Found some mistakes and tried to give some suggestions.

Ah, forgot to put a note for this one :

p27

That's why there is a saying --> That's why there is a phrase

NB : But a saying is also okay, just a suggestion.

some note on Una Nancy Owen's suggestions

P.3
writer seem to write in verse, so I try to retain the word, but I give final decision to who edit this doujin.

P.9
about "The task until tomorrow..." Renko said "task until tomorrow", I think she mean from the time of speak to the end of today in the story. but the follow after that is fine for change.

about "department" It's refer to university department, I think it's more accurate than field.

p.12

"the name" I try to stress on name "Sakuya Izayori" which is the name Remilia gave to her, not her real name. also the reason why I use word recieved.

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http://www.mediafire.com/?jwwm0nwdznd

another sakuya meeting remi eh

where's glorious revolution final ;_;

does anyone happen to have the 2nd volume of this one?

wow, didn't know kujira lorant did a doujin of this. wish i knew japanese though. love their style and making wriggle kick ass is always a nice touch.

almost fully translated:
http://danbooru.donmai.us/pool/show/2579

>>46443
Fully translated now. anyone willing to edit?