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>> No.58910  
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Been absent for a while, so hope this can be a good start.
Here's the translation script.
You can do your stuff now, Kamonichan.

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Here's the QC. Thank you very much for indulging my selfish bump.

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Got it, the corrections are all in the script now.

A question though, on p.25.
The "What's troubling you > What's wrong with me?"
Does it really makes more sense if Nazrin was referring to herself instead of Shou?
I thought it was directed to Shou since she kept asking about Bishamonten and Nazrin refused to answer before. So she explained the reason(Bishamonten will never contact her again) in that page.
But perhaps it's just my interpretation of the situation. Thoughts?
Changed it to "What are you so concerned about?", by the way. Pick whichever is best.

Changed the one on p.28. My mistake
Thanks to you poking... > I was just tired…

Still, seeing that, did my grammar become worse or what...? orz

>> No.58923  

I thought she was just talking to herself and wondering aloud, but looking over it again I can see she was talking to Shou while she was "sleeping." I'm glad you cleared that up for me.

>> No.58930  

Well, maybe for first timers that is something that people will probably miss.
If you've read his other doujins, Afterglow
You'll see that the Bishamonten Kuvela is only using Byakuren and Shou to gather youkai for him to exterminate later, so he could gain fame as the God of War. He practically sent Nazrin to her death.
But of course, that didn't go smoothly. Don't underestimate the Myouren Temple residents.

I don't know about his fate now though. Never seen DYNAMO mention him again.

Anyway, since you also agree with that, it's time to ask for someone to start editing this.

Open for edit, guys.

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465562 No.58928   [Reply]

Don't see it here yet.

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And the script please qc and edit.
You may want to change the title thought

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Cover: >>4414

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>> No.4554  

.... Yeah, last page. Don't need another blank page, after all.

>> No.12270  

Tentative Title: Hungry Hakugyokurou

>> No.20896  

how's progress?

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First time posting a translation here, so I hope I didn't do anything wrong. (I did two Neko no Sakegoto books with Ean, though.)

By the way, it's not "Hakugyokurou" in the title, but "Shiratamarou" (it's a just stupid pun that I explain in the script). I personally translated the title to "Starving Tower of White Dumplings".

Erm... Not much to say otherwise.


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>> No.58907  

oh man,bump for translation
Ran so kawaii

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>> No.58879  

v1: https://dory.moe/tmp/GoodbyeHeaven.zip

My typesetting hasn't done this doujin justice. I tried.

>> No.58880  

Just two things I noticed:

p.9 'breathe' misspelled as 'breath'
'Once the apocalypse happened...' -> 'Once the apocalypse happens...'

Also, that was a wonderful read.

>> No.58891  

v2: https://dory.moe/tmp/GoodbyeHeaven_v2.zip

>> No.58893  

Page 13, "this kind of things" -> "this kind of thing".

>> No.58895  

v3: https://dory.moe/tmp/GoodbyeHeaven_v3.zip

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178236 No.56889   [Reply]

Unedited scans. These need to be cleaned up before they can be considered proper raws. See >>55777 for more details.


I have no idea what's going on here.

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>> No.58887  

Alt version: https://mega.co.nz/#!xoBm2TqI!FkWC7pUIgIntzaZLCxaCB9Na2kVZf7OrRgcsVwXH0vE

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855630 No.58777   [Reply]

New NnS book. Doing it joint with KirbyDances.

Nietz, we saw next Suwakoto chapter in the thread, but pesu is currently busy, so I'm not sure when exactly we can start working on it. Sorry.

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Aand done. Short one.

>> No.58843  

Wow. I have to agree with Marisa - Alice didn't look nearly as developed the last time we saw her trying to take a bath with Marisa.

P1, panel 4: "I mustn't forget I didn't come here to play today" - very rough. Was "that" supposed to appear between ”forget" and "didn't"?

Page 4, panel 3 ”I thought maybe I'd look cuter in it" - same thing as the above, between ”thought" and "maybe".

Page 7, panel 4: "Isn't she much too defenseless?" - this sentence is a bit stilted. I'd either get rid of the much, or replace it with "a bit"

Page 9, panel 2: "soft as a board" sounds weird. Didn't she say hard, like she does a page later?

P 10, panel 3: "it may sound stupid to you. But I'm really troubled over it!" - I'd replace the period with a comma and change over to by or about. Like this: "It may sound stupid to you, but I'm really troubled by it!"

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>> No.58875  

Page 1, panel 4: I didn't write a "that" in my script because I really think it's not needed here, but why not.

Page 4, panel 3: I'd say no, because: leaving "that" out sounds best with the most common verbs of speech or thought, such as "say," "think," "know," "claim," "hear," or "believe." - Source: http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/omitting-%E2%80%9Cthat%E2%80%9D

Page 7, panel 4: hmm... No, it's really emphasized that she's MUCH too defenseless in Japanese. But I think I found a better translation anyway: "Isn't she way too defenseless...?"

Page 9, panel 2: yeah, that would sound much better (and she says neither soft nor hard in Japanese, she says that her chest is "kotsukotsu", which is the sound of knocking on wood, so I had to adapt a bit).

Page 10, panel 3: it actually is a comma (it's just that commas don't look very different from periods in that font and it's an all-caps font, it could be a good idea to use another font, though).

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Thanks for the QC everyone, archive's updated.


> I'm so jealous of (..) Alice (bathing with Marisa), right now...

We all know that Alice's have no chances with Marisa, alas. I like ReiMari more, actually, but that will force NnS to create some sort of forced comforting pairing for Alice. That thought makes me sad.


Also, gentlemen, I got like ~ten notifications like that from MF already. I guess we should consider MF old and busted and start using something else instead. Mega, maybe?

>> No.58885  


She doesn't have a chance, but I'm still jealous. Maybe if she'd been less pushy early on, she MIGHT have had a chance, but ReiMari is pretty much a solid pairing in a NnS story.

And unlike Satou Kibi Alice, she doesn't have the charm to catch anyone.

Speaking of which, there's two volumes I've seen on Danbooru that don't appear to have raws here, but I digress.

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63944 No.58842   [Reply]

I have the pdf for the doujin novel of Gymmopedie, which is a supplement to many of the RD-sounds songs about Marry and Renko. Thing is I can't read Japanese. Is here anyone willing to translate it? or where can I find someone?

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>> No.58861  

That's odd...it says that the password "rd" (without quotes, right?) is wrong, and I didn't have to input a password to open the zip file. Would it be possible to upload a copy that isn't password-protected?

>> No.58862  

Im currently trying to unlock it, brute force manner, so it may take a while. I will post it when I finish unlocking it

>> No.58863  

To elaborate: I got the files ina zip archive with the password "rd" (no quotations), so I assumed that the pass would be the same

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I managed to unlock the PDF.

>> No.58884  

I created a page at the link below (title pending)...but because the PDF text is vertical, you need to run the text through a line break removal and space removal tool before you can paste it properly. I don't usually do stuff on wikis so I'm kinda going in blind here haha, feel free to improve the formatting.

Will work on this slowly, but probably will never get it done on my own.

http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/The_Gymnop%C3%A9die_Will_Not_End (Wiki page)
http://www.textfixer.com/tools/remove-line-breaks.php (Line break remover)
http://textmechanic.com/Remove-Extra-Spaces.html (Space remover)

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