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1686784 No.56371   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?ul68phazax8dkd0

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>> No.57083  

>>57082

pg 02 : "Didn't expect my experiment to have this side effect." --> "I didn't expect my experiment to have this side effect."

pg 05 : "Yeah... / there's / only / so much a flower / could do." --> "Yeah... / there's /only so / much a / flower / could do."
2nd panel, first bubble : the text alignment doesn't seem to be centered.

pg 11 : "What would have happened"?--> "What would have happened?"
last panel : "Now, / don't / be so smug / about it."-->Now, / don't be / so smug / about it."

Thanks for your work!

>> No.57089  

>>57083
Thanks!
v3: files.hoangduyud.com/manga/little_witch_and_her_ordinary_world_v3.zip

>> No.57090  

>>57089
Thanks for your work! Damn it was good :3
Also nice edit.

>> No.57117  

V4 (nothing changed, except for SFX on p4): http://files.hoangduyud.com/manga/little_witch_and_her_ordinary_world_v4.zip

>> No.57128  

Okay, archived.
http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Vivit_Gray#Little_Witch_and_Her_Ordinary_World_.282013-06-13.29



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>> No.57069  

Great work!

Only thing I saw is that the text on page 17, "Is not related..", is going out of the bubble.

>> No.57071  

>>57069 That's intentional. That's how the text is placed in the raw.^_^

>> No.57095  

2nd panel of page 11, needs a space between "you" and "can".

>> No.57097  

Done!

https://www.mediafire.com/?tbw9dix9mfp96zi

>> No.57127  

Archived.
http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/That_Other_Crowd#Golden_Cutting_Line_.282012-08-11.29



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1507280 No.56859   [Reply]

https://www.mediafire.com/?t45674h4l4kofvp

>> No.56909  

Bump

>> No.56910  

Bumpp

>> No.57122  

Bump for translation.



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3278666 No.50427   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?67j85uuo5hqlvse

>> No.57120  

The script is on this thread.
http://voile.gensokyo.org/res/47273.html



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1529413 No.57115   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?a76tw7c9dv6nrvb



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5905384 No.57114   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?ajc5m43d2cdzy9d



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576555 No.53728   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/?g28h1if138dp55r

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>> No.56959  

>>56958
Thanks.
But er... there's no text file.

>> No.57032  

Pg. 5: Replace comma after Orin with ellipses (i.e. "Orin...)
To make it sound more natural, try replacing Satori's "...yes?" with "...what is it?"

Pg. 6: "I wonder if she dropped the doll while she was fighting" sound more natural.

Pg. 8: "and was made with such care" needs to be "and it was made with such care"

Pg. 9:
Third panel: Reword it to "If you ask for it later, I won't give it back"
Last panel: "It really doesn't look like Okuu" or "It really doesn't look a thing like Okuu"
Keep "I know, right?" but change the last bubble to, "That's why I don't think the doll is cute at all." Having two "at all" phrases is a little clunky.

Pg. 10: People don't normally say, "I'm really happy," so try changing it to something like, "I really love this doll" or "I really do love this doll" to make it sound more natural.

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>> No.57046  

>>57032
Thank you very much, yo.

zip
http://www.mediafire.com/download/u60nln4t28c8ioc/AO_-_Prayer.zip

left "come" on page 11. It's being used colloquially as "come here".

13
Went with "Yeah, so?"

>(I notice you're overusing ellipses, especially to bridge between speech bubbles that don't need it. As long as there's no punctuation, there's no need to show that one phrase continues to the next.)

Just making a note on this in case you come across it again.

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>> No.57056  

Glad I could be of help. I've always wanted to be an editor, so I suppose this is just as good. If you need any help, I'll gladly provide.

>> No.57086  

Archived.
http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Blue#Touhou_Blue_Book:_Prayer_.282012-10-07.29



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435482 No.57054   [Reply]

https://mega.co.nz/#!fYMmURgB!lRoS9_iaMqJI-b54c2XilTqSpSCZJNNR4HeiZmc8rSg



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320583 No.57051   [Reply]

https://mega.co.nz/#!fIEDCbQI!c4LKjx-djuUwkDi8DzJSNzfexlbAKaItQMqfbuixqsQ

Hello,I'm new here.I want to ask some question about posting doujinshi here.
1.Can I use other space to upload my file?I tried using mediafire to upload my file,but it kept failing.
2.Can I post doujinshi that haven't been translated?It seems most of the archived doujinshi were already translated.
Thanks for answering my question.If it's not proper,I'll delete this post.

>> No.57052  

Thanks, Mega should work just fine, I guess.

You are supposed to upload RAW, untranslated doujins here. Only then we can translate and edit it before having it archived.

Also, Moonspeaker already translated this in Danbooru. So remember to include the link next time.
http://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/7783

>> No.57053  

Thank you for answering!I wll remeber to check Danbooru next time.



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334558 No.57039   [Reply]

https://www.mediafire.com/?zvsm6asscd45ccl



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