p1
"Yes! I am going off." ->
"Yes! I'll be leaving then."
p2
"but she gives off such bad feeling" ->
"but she gives off such a bad feeling"
or
"but she gives off such a bad vibe"
"new medicine for stomach ache" ->
"new medicine for stomach aches"
p3
"Is it really like this!?"
"Is it really like that!?"
"If you don't help the other side to understand what are you talking, then nom understanding can rise from it" ->
"If you don't help the other side understand what you're talking about, then non-understanding can arise from it"
'Yo...
"Yo?"'
->
'You...
You?'
"star my class now" ->
"start my class now"
"I'd understand if you listened carefully" ->
"You'd understand if you listened carefully"
"you would put things in an easy way" ->
"you would put things simply"
"learning form a bad example" ->
"learning from a bad example"
p4
"Arrived at next house to visit" ->
"Arrived at the next house to visit"
"ling time" ->
"long time"
p6
"Some girls hardly get old, and they hardly get smart"
"Some girls hardly grow old, and hardly grow wise"