http://www.mediafire.com/?yzoll2zymyy

Yay for Aki Sisters.

Let me come back and clean up this script again later.
For now, it's only a quick translation that went through rough spell-checking, but should be able to tell what's going on in the story.

>>29390
Alright, I'll edit this one starting this weekend except anyone else wants to do it instead. Might take me some time, and I don't think I'm capable of dealing with >>29367 but I can try.

>>29394
It's not as bad as it looks minus leaves.

The script has been updated and should be decent enough. I'm rooting for you, Kyon.

That's it. For now.

On page 23 (022.jpg), bottom right panel last bubble below 時間が時間ですので, what does the text say?

お昼ですし
It's noon, you know.

>>29774
I see. So "It's still afternoon." should work for everything in that bubble more or less?

yup. I think so.

On the last page, the second asterisk is not translated, I think. Between the "This is a derivative work of Touhou Project..." disclaimer and above the credits.

Reprint and copy of this book without authority are prohibited.

>>29823
Thanks again. Well, I'm done except for >>29367. I'll get on it on thursday.

Here is the whole thing, for proofreading.

http://www.mediafire.com/?mbygywn0gdg

Pg 20:

Back tea ---> Black Tea
with these guys ---> of these guys

Page 8: "Gash!" Is this supposed to be "Gosh"? Since I'm not sure how "Gash!" fits as a stand-alone exclamation.
Page 11: "These guys are voting out on a whim": "out" doesn't really fit there.

Didn't really see anything else.

Just waiting for the corrections to archive it.

Sorry for the delay.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ltz52namnyd

OK, archived.
http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Mitter_Nacht_Bibliothek#Autumn_Dusk_.282008-11-02.29

I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. Thanks for working on it.