Done.

These pages on MF: http://www.mediafire.com/?ujmzmmmmyhn

Relatively new doujins. Proofreading might be helpful.

Loved the story, with plenty of interesting character interaction.

>>34758
Just some minor things like spelling :)

08.
Next to Ko: I stayed up all night
Next to Ko: making up those lines...

09.
Ko: Until I get that shrine maiden... Sanae Kochiya...

19.
Ko: When I woke up, I was lying on the ground...

20.
Yu: I see, I see... That sounds interesting.
Yu: Something you'll be able to talk about in a drinking party.
...
Ko: I can't even make one girl surprised...

24.
Open Star "The Day the Stars Split"

Boo!

I'll pick this up after I finish Gensokyo Escape.

Some changes to the translation. I incorporated them as well as Lunachild's suggestions to the new attached text file. Please use this when you edit.

Changes are the following:
Ko: You idiots are no much for her.
Ko: You idiots are no match for her!

Ko: I didn't expect them here...
Ko: I didn't expect them to be here...

Ko: surprise them
Ko: scare them

Ko: I just freaked a heck out of he...
Ko: I just freaked the heck out of her...

Ay: I mean... do someone no one has thought about.
Ay: I mean... do something no one has thought about.

Ay: Then, do what I tell you here...
Ay: Then, do as I tell you here...

Rem: I take back what I've said...
Rem: I take back what I said...

Ko: I'm never gonna be able to
Ko: I'm never gonna

Ko: I'm never gonna be able to make her surprised...
Ko: I'm never gonna be able to surprise her...

Ko: I can't even make one girl surprised...
Ko: I can't even surprise a girl...

Yu: You wanna make her surprised, right?
Yu: You wanna surprise her, right?

Yu: A way to make a girl surprised.
Yu: A way to surprise a girl.

Ko: I'm gonna make you surprised today!!
Ko: I'm gonna surprise you today!!

That's it for now.

Thought I'd give a heads up this time.
I'll be flying out in the morning and won't be back for at least a week.

Finally finished.

http://www.mediafire.com/?dziy2z3wytw

>>35838
Not exactly a typo but, the name of Sanae's spell card in here is different from Touhou Wiki:
Sea Opening "The Day the Sea Split"

(http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Touhou_Hisoutensoku:_Sanae_Kochiya%27s_deck_cards)

>>35842
That's actually a sort of pun on that spell ("Sea" -> "Star").

Looking back, the verb "split" seems to be in past tense, and the noun "star" should be singular. So, I would propose:
Star Opening "The Day the Star Split"

Updated page, and an updated link.

http://www.mediafire.com/?dh3133klmmm

And this one's archived;

http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/UkiUki_Watching#Please_Tell_Me.21_.282009-12-13.29