I do hope someone translate this and the rest of Millet Soup doujins from >>35290

TL attached.

Forgot to mention that the title should probably be "A Certain Scarlet Devil's Sunny-Side-Up Eggs!!", being a parody of the ToAru Railgun/Index series. (the story isn't a parody though.)

I'll do this one.

It's finished...
http://www.mediafire.com/?jkymy3wwnmn

I can't offer much but on page 13, wouldn't

I had instead of I have?

Fit better?

>>38543
>>38544

13.png:
have/had a hunch
I think either would work, with different nuances. But since the text was in present tense, I would use "have".

29.png:
bought quite a bit > bought quite a few

30.png:
Alright, then are > Alright then, are

I like how you handled the afterword page.

Okay I fixed the things on pages 29/30.

I think the text on page 13 is fine as is.

Here's new version:
http://www.mediafire.com/?yz23xy2vczm

Archived:

http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Millet_Soup#A_Certain_Scarlet_Devil.27s_Sunny-Side-Up_Eggs.21.21_.282009-12-30.29