I guess it's good enough.

also Renko is officially cool now

Maribel Looks quite serious there.

>>38482
As the person who uploaded the doujin, I must ask for some patience. The translators and editors of Voile will work on what they desire to work on. There's no need to push this up very often. Maybe a bump every several weeks/months will suffice for the doujin you want to bring attention to.

I translated the 1st chapter
I'll probabbly translat the rest too.

Meanwhile, I'd appreciate if anyone points out any mistakes, give any suggestions, or something

I'm not sure what the standard for partial translations are. Does it go under editable or not?

I think this would go under Hard~Lunatic since... transparent... bubbles.

>>38863
I wouldn't put it under editable just yet. Though you can put it under In Progress with a note that says "translation ongoing".

>>38864
Note taken.

Here is part 2!!

I ask you to remember that neither english nor japanese are my native language.
So while I can make sense out of the moonrunes, sometimes I just can't put it nicely in english afterwards.
Sure, Im learning. But for the sake of a job well done, when ANY of you spot some crude error please notify me. I appreciate the help.

also note that this transaltion is not complete. there are a few parts I just couldn't understand at all. I will need help with these.
and there are parts I couldn't read because it was too messy...

anyway, here it is

Mae, you ready for this?

>>40184
I'm still quite busy with Cirno and Reimu's 1-2-3, so until I'm done, someone else can take a shot at this if they want.

Edit bump

I changed around some of the lines, so could someone please check over it in case I lost some of the meaning.

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Here I'm confused as to whether Renko is talking about matter as in substance, or matter as in studies?

Well, I took it as something like studies. There's probably a better word for it that I can't think of right now.

>>38853
You said you had some trouble reading the text next to the kanji, so I blew it up a little.

>>40547
matter as in studies.
>>40548
yes, I can read it better now.
the text beside the kanji is just furigana.
so the sentence becomes something like
"In here smoking is strictly forbidden."

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transparency ho~
It's not bad though, plenty of text and blank areas

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I went with surprisingly common taste.
Also, is there something we can use for "ara"?

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I need some help with the text placement, I really couldn't follow it at all.
For quick reference, it's under page 10 in the translation text.

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12 is a title/break/whateveritscalled page

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1/2 of 17

Some help with the translation for the bottom half please.

>>40542
"It's the worst, isn't it?" -> "It was the worst, wasn't it?"
Let's keep the tense consistent since it's talking about the first meeting in the past tense.

>>40543
"I said it's creepy" -> "I said they're creepy"

>>40557
I would suggest "Oh!" or "Ah!".

>>40559
(Bubble #1) With these eyes I see through boundaries, I see them very clearly, without any obstructions.

(Bubble #2) It can be useful to the public, it can be useful to people.

(Bubble #3) That's right, (Punctuation up to you.)

(Bubble #4) I should cooperate willingly...

(Bubble #5) Creepy indeed...

(Last Panel, Top Bubble) they're the worse...

(Last Panel, Bottom Bubble)...Those eyes.

>>40563
Mary. Let's stick to Merry or Mary, whichever you choose.

"Ara" -> "Ah" or "Oh." Or something similar. Something playful will work.

Other than that, no problems so far. Thank you for your work.

>>40568
Thanks

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Something for the last bubble maybe? Or should I just break up the text somewhere.

I'll add some notes for "ghost genetics" and qualia later on.

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Don't really get the "recommendation" thing either, is it meant to be like, "found someone my type?"

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I put in an "Eh?" for Merry's bubble at the bottom, since that's what I normally see it translated as. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

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Same comment as above.

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Caught up to all the translations so far.

Forgot to mention that I took some liberties with breaking up the text here >>40607

Bumpetty

Bumper. Aw come on, don't leave this one half-way~

Translation for the last two chapters

Hope nobody minds this being resurrected

>>44700
Oh wow.

I'm on it.

A bump for page 17's translation.
>>40567

>>44711
Maribel: Something people would call a test animal...Renko

Renko: Yea, so they would-- Mary

Maribel: ...eh, "Test?"

while I'm at it, if you don't mind,

>>40604 Page 19

last balloon "Over there's---"

Also balloon#5, definitetively --> definitely

>>40607 Page 22

panel 3, text in both balloons seems to be flipped in order

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Changed to jpeg cause I forgot that png hates gradients.

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Break time.

Forgot to mention on page 38, I had an untranslated bubble. >>44802

>>44802
sorry 'bout that, dunno how I missed this

Panel 1 balloon 2

Renko:

Just for you alone

>>40608
You'd be correct. It's pretty much that.

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zip
http://www.mediafire.com/?ld3naqau0mtyylx

For anyone curious, the BGM
http://www.mediafire.com/?h73qzw0enss4oy2

>>44871
Just need the links in the credits now.

>>44936
Whoops. Forgot all about the links.

http://www.mediafire.com/?n7wqu2p1j43w2f1

Archived.
http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Ropiropi#Wonderful_Beautiful_Eye_.282008-11-25.29