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[ビビットグレー] はんぶんこのまんなか Nameless Fairy 11/03/23(Wed)10:57 ID:UWVtHo/U No.44201

Finally!
http://www.mediafire.com/?9ynyz0j37td4pw7
And I would like to edit this too.

>>	53RG10 11/03/23(Wed)16:54 ID:UkKlmFkB No.44206 I'll take up translation.

>>	53RG10 11/03/24(Thu)19:24 ID:UkKlmFkB No.44223 File: 1301016284366.txt.unknown -(7130 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. No thumbnail Title could use a second opinion.

>>	Frey 11/03/24(Thu)19:41 ID:UWVtHo/U No.44224 >>44223 Thanks. So, I'm going to start to edit now.

>>	Frey 11/03/25(Fri)18:11 ID:UWVtHo/U No.44230 File: 1301098260343.jpg -(691040 B, 1129x1600) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. Cover.

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>>	Frey 11/03/25(Fri)19:17 ID:UWVtHo/U No.44233 File: 1301102239222.jpg -(659628 B, 1121x1600) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. Any suggestion for the title?

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>>	Frey 11/03/25(Fri)19:47 ID:UWVtHo/U No.44246 File: 1301104040375.jpg -(217336 B, 1121x1600) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size. 17 And I'm done for today.

>>	Frey 11/03/27(Sun)15:11 ID:UWVtHo/U No.44263 Alright! All done: http://www.mediafire.com/?fk5mcycou5uy5fo

>>	Nameless Fairy 11/03/27(Sun)20:26 ID:wuLE0rJh No.44265 Sweet MokouxKeine, my favourite. Thanks.

>>	Nameless Fairy 11/03/29(Tue)14:51 ID:krANDimr No.44308 Thanks! This was adorable, but on p.23: existance -> existence.

>>	Frey 11/03/29(Tue)17:38 ID:UWVtHo/U No.44310 >>44308 Oh, thank you. Fixed: http://www.mediafire.com/?1u1jbra8ozcjtlm

somethingsomething 11/03/31(Thu)11:34 ID:XMUzh56G No.44358

I am saddened - SADDENED! - that the script Soljashy and I used when the "Tied to You" chapter was posted on danbooru wasn't used. ;__; But I'll get over it. XD Moving on...
Page 6, panel 3: Mokou gives a little "hee" of interest, so IF you feel like drawing in a "Hmm?", "Huh..." or some equivalent there, you could.
"That's so romantic."
Page 8, panel 1: Missing a period.
Page 14, panel 2: I'm really inclined to think, given Keine's reaction, that her small "ee" with an emphasis mark is a questioning "Huh?!" But if you wanted to keep it as "Yeah...", maybe you could add a question mark at the end, as if she were repeating Mokou's "Yeah".
Page 19, panel 3: Substitute "at" or "after" for "up".
Page 21, panel 1: "I'm not so weak"
Panel 5: "has been."
Page 26, panel 1: "Today as well," the meaning is the same but I think it sounds more natural.
Panel 3: "That's the norm"
Page 27, panel 1: Missing a comma between "words" and "right".
Page 29, panel 4: Should change it to "think it weird of me" or "think weirdly of me".
Thanks as always for your time and effort.

Frey 11/04/01(Fri)20:45 ID:NFmr94lM No.44381

>>44358
Well then:
Page 6, panel 3: I've put "Oh..."
I don't think that "hee" came from Mokou, but from Daiyousei, I guess...?
Also, I took the translation from booru for the previous bubble.
Page 14, panel 2: I agree, so I changed it to "Huh!?."
Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?01gjfy98juv1mal

somethingsomething 11/04/02(Sat)13:37 ID:XMUzh56G No.44405

>>44381
> I don't think that "hee" came from Mokou, but from Daiyousei, I guess...?
Ah, yeah... that's probably the case, I had always attributed it to Mokou since the balloon was in such close proximity to her, with no one else but Mystia on panel. Thanks again.

>>	Nietz 11/05/15(Sun)11:57 ID:IbXQf2GA No.44957 Archived. http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Vivit_Gray#Evenly_Split_Down_the_Middle_.282010-03-14.29

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