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2920622 No.47273  

(C80)[Cake House] Indigo inherit (Circle Name May Need Correcting)
Nice Art.

http://www.mediafire.com/?63360uo7p6g5k05

>> No.54555  
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Script please Qc and edit.

There also another one who up this doujin here
http://voile.gensokyo.org/res/50427.html

File of this thread is bigger than the above one because it include seperate cover page, the rest is the same.

>> No.58908  

bump for edit

>> No.58927  
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Here's the QC for review. There were just a couple spots I marked that need double-checking.

>> No.58933  

On Pg. 09:

[3]
Ran: As expected of Yukari-sama, she only (not sure what she means with “stick”) but it's flexible.
: It helps that the work is fun.

Look at it again it should be,
: As expect of Yukari-sama, she just stretched it, she sure flexible. <or resourceful >
: It's help that the work is easy.

but please check again.
流石は紫様が張られただけあって融通がききますな

>> No.58952  

Pg. 09:
[3]
Ran: As expected of Yukari-sama, she just stretched it. She's so resourceful.
:It helps that the work is easy.

>> No.60315  
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This one is from a bit ago, but since we've made a bit of a dent into what currently needs editing, I thought I'd bump it with the final script compiled.

>> No.60338  

Still here. I'm currently editing this.
Progress: 20%.

>> No.60390  

Is anyone currently editing this?

>> No.60398  

I'll assume that the lack of informations or updates from Nameless Fairy means that it has been dropped, so I'll edit it myself then.

>> No.60399  

Here's the edited version:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/ve7q1awuuwulans/Ii_Eng.zip

The amount of changes that I made is so absurdly high that I won't even bother listing them here.

My main concern is that part with Kyubi and treating Ran as a machine (restarting, operating) on pages 22-29 might be confusing.

>> No.60401  

p23
[2]
The text is
九尾の欠片に結界を引かせ
so it's more like :
I order her, pull the barrier to the fragment of Kyubi

So to sum up if I not mistke
Yukari order Ran to

  1. pull a part to barrier to Kyubi.
  2. when the real body of Kyubi pass through the barrier, seal/trap it.
  3. Use herself as a wall to prevent Kyubi from running away (use her body to trap it).

p24
[4]
Suika said as Ran study how to put up barrier, she is surely aware that she will possible end up like this (due to too high level).

as Kamonichan script :
Studying how to put up a barrier, it's impossible she wasn't aware what would happen to her...

>> No.60402  
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959349

Here's the new page 23.

>> No.60404  
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856726

And page 24 with a minor change. I left the 2nd bubble in the 4th panel as it was, because it conveys the same message, even though it's a conditional sentence.
It still says that Ran knew what would happen to her, otherwise she wouldn't be able to learn how to put up barriers in the first place.

>> No.60406  

>>60404
It's more like
If you study how to make a firecracker, you'll know that it have a chance to blow up on your face.
than
It impossible to study about making fire cracker, if you don't know there is a chance it'll blow up on your face.

As it not impossible to study or make one, even when you don't know how danger it is.

>> No.60408  

>>60406
Okay, I get what you mean.

This is the line in question (p24[4]):
結界を張る過程で自分がどうなるか気づかなかったはずが無い・・・

I checked again what you wrote before and thought how to fit it smoothly into this dialogue, and here is my suggestion:
"When studying how to put up a barrier you'll become aware of what can happen to your body..."

Alternatively I can replace "become aware of" with "realize" and "studying" with "you study".

I know that the script has two negations, so if you want I can also edit it as:
"You can't study how to put up a barrier without becoming aware of what can happen to your body..."

In both cases Suika wouldn't say it to anyone specific, it would be more like thinking out loud.

Is any of these options acceptable?

>> No.60417  
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856043

The new page 24, I went with:
"When you study how to put up a barrier you become aware of what can happen to your body..."

>> No.60418  
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845080

And a minor change on page 25. In the last bubble "feeling is" was changed to "feeling was" since the previous bubble was also in past simple.

>> No.60430  

Just needs a credits page, or maybe add the credits in a corner of p. 31.

You can use this template:
Gaku-Gaku Animal Land
Touhou Branch

Translation:
Edit:
Special Thanks: [if any]

www.gensokyo.org
en.touhouwiki.net
voile.gensokyo.org

Or the short template:
Gaku-Touhou
Translation:
Edits:
Special thanks:
gensokyo.org / en.touhouwiki.net

>> No.60432  
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23952

It's nothing sophisticated, but maybe it will suffice.

>> No.60447  

Archived.
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Senbei_Shop#Indigo_Inherit_.282011-08-13.29



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