http://www.mediafire.com/?q9zow9r23mb9h3k
So now Remilia joined Patchouli in travelling in the basket on Meiling back?Glorious~
Finished translating this.Might required checking and editing.
Finished translating this.
Might required checking and editing.
Will edit.
Done.http://www.mediafire.com/?v4dlt2h6o04k6b3
This all i noticed.P. 5First Patchouli-sama -> First[,] Patchouli-samaThen the mistress -> Then[,] the mistressP. 6Therefore listening -> Therefore[,] listeningP. 12But I wonder how did that songwriter hear -> But I wonder[,] how did that songwriter hear -OR- But I wonder how that songwriter [heard] (Dropping "did" in the second suggestion. Your choice.)P. 15Since we're together -> Since [we were] together -OR- Since [we've been] together
This all i noticed.
P. 5First Patchouli-sama -> First[,] Patchouli-sama
Then the mistress -> Then[,] the mistress
P. 6Therefore listening -> Therefore[,] listening
P. 12But I wonder how did that songwriter hear -> But I wonder[,] how did that songwriter hear -OR- But I wonder how that songwriter [heard] (Dropping "did" in the second suggestion. Your choice.)
P. 15Since we're together -> Since [we were] together -OR- Since [we've been] together
There's a missing line from the script on page 6 last panel, "Therefore!" which goes before "Without a donut,"
There's a missing line from the script on page 6 last panel,
"Therefore!" which goes before "Without a donut,"
>>49105Thanks>>49111Oh, my badUpdated:http://www.mediafire.com/?jedsnedxidlbjjr
Everything looks to be in order here. I didn't catch anything else.
Archived then.http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/One-way_Ticket#The_Witch_Goes_on_a_Trip_Again_.282011-08-13.29
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