Translated and edited this.

QC welcome.

http://www.mediafire.com/?694ditfk2dv7ltc

Here's some QC. To be honest, I didn't find the font you used for the regular dialogue to suit the doujin very well. But that's personal opinion and need not be taken seriously.

Thanks for checking. I figured the font might be summat hard to read so it's changed in this version.

Update.
http://www.mediafire.com/?5adihmavqawee66

The font's much easier to read now. In any case, just a couple more things.

P. 22
Telepgraphers -> [Telegraphers]

P. 25
How'd it come to that -> How'd [you come up with] that -OR- How'd you [get that] (Just a suggestion.)

>>49171
I changed pg 22 but kept pg 25.

Anyway, here's yet another update!
http://www.mediafire.com/?cosv3dgleacofrv

Looks good to go to me.

The only thing I thing needs changing is the instances of "Mari" to "Mary", since it's the established form of Maribel/Merrybery's nickname.

>>49229
Right, changed all that.

Updated again.
http://www.mediafire.com/?gcnauulzlkbirib

Archived.
http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Yomoyama#Summer_Heat_Haze_.282011-08-14.29