Reposting the zip with corrected pages for QC, since the original thread at >>17752 doesn't bump anymore.http://www.mediafire.com/?8z61jaxhs2l3tdiSince
Things I noticed.
Here's a few other miscellaneous things. Not much.
>>49094Yes, it was a little too cluttered, what you think of this?Also fixed the mistakes pointed in >>49094 and >>49107
>>49094Yes, it was a little too cluttered, what you think of this?
Also fixed the mistakes pointed in >>49094 and >>49107
Quick question, are the gaps in the double spreads going to remain there? I could try redrawing them if it's alright.
>>49116IMO, that looks good.
>>49120I wanted to redraw them, but I'm not confident I could do it properly, but you can give it a try if you want.
>>49137Right, here's the results. Howzit look?pgs 38-39
>>49137Right, here's the results. Howzit look?
pgs 38-39
pgs 48-49
pgs 54-55
This was actually the hardest. Not too sure of the end results.pgs 112-113
This was actually the hardest. Not too sure of the end results.
pgs 112-113
>>49161>>49162>>49163>>49164Screentone isn't even where the seams are. Everything else looks good. Well, I'm usually harsher on this kind of thing. Nietz gets the final word here.
>>49166yea, it was quite hard trying to align the seams with the gradient tones, I'll try again.
>>49166>>49167Yes, you can see a screentone difference in the seams. But frankly, I had to a little look hard to find it, I don't think most readres would notice. Still, it'd be good if you could get it better.
Sorry this is taking awhile. Howzit look now?
There was one screentone seam here that I wasn't able to properly align, hopefully it isn't too noticeable.
>>49239>>49240It's harder to notice. I say it passes.
>>49241Thanks for checking, I'll move on to the next two spreads, then.
Next spread. Final one later this week.
Finished the final spread. Sorry it too awhile. Does it look okay?
- wakaba 3.0.7 + futaba + futallaby -
