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>> No.60539  

I'll get to work on this for my next project.

>> No.60554  

Got this one finished and ready for checks.


>> No.60559  
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There were a few points I thought needed some adjustments. They're listed here.

>> No.60563  

Thanks for checking it out. I changed all of them except for the 1st one. I was having Miko comment on their shared shikaisen status while flattering Seiga.


>> No.60564  

It's a run-on sentence as it is, so I was wondering if it could be divided in two, and if so, where. To keep it as one sentence, maybe something like this?

Taishi: Yet in the same way I have chosen the path of Shikaisen with you, my master, and so there can be no wrong, correct?

Or drop the "and" and have it, "[...] so there can be no wrong, correct?"

>> No.60565  

Okay, I broke it up into two sentences. Should be good to go.


>> No.60569  


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