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05
Reimu:"I finally go out for a walk" "but with weather this nice it's hard just staying awake."

07
Reimu:"Huh?" "Where am I?"
Remilia:"Oh" "Good evening, Reimu"
Reimu:"Remilia? What is this place?"
Remilia:"Honestly, who cares." "More importantly" "weren't you worked up that you got a part in the next installment?"

08
Reimu:"What are you talking about?"
Remilia:"It's exactly what I'm talking about."
Yuyuko:"You heard her"
Reimu:"Wah"
Yuyuko:"Don't even think about leaving us behind." "But..." "judging by the look of things, the role in the next installment won't be yours."
Reimu:"What's that supposed to mean?!"
Shikieiki:"It could be..."

09
Shikieiki:"You've commited one too many bad deeds."
Reimu:"You're here, too?!"
Remilia:"I" "could be manipulating fate"
Yuyuko:"I'm really not doing anything" "but you get the idea"
Reimu:"Then who's playing Reimu" "in the next installment!?"

10
Reimu(new):"I'm the Reimu in the next installment."
Reimu:"Heh?"
Reimu(original):"Welcome." Been waiting for you
Reimu:"Hol-- hold on" "THIS IS JUST WRONG"

12
Reimu:"I'm pretty sure" "I just had a ridiculous nightmare"
Yukari:"Oh" "Then you must be feeling awful."
Reimu:"Walking right into bedrooms..." "You could hold back a little, you know?"

13
Yukari:"Today" "I wanted to wish you well."
Reimu:"What's with the creepy formality?" "Are you going somewhere?"
Yukari:"No." "You're the one who's going" "Reimu"

14
Yukari:"This Gensokyo's become stable." "Enough to where the fantastic can no longer occur." "And so a new Gensokyo must be prepared." "You're needed there."
"Don't worry, the new Gensokyo would be an extension of the current." "Just a little off." "Some things will stay the same while some would be lost."
Reimu:"I know" "I don't need you to tell me."

15
Yukari:"It's the only way to maintain the outer world." "At the least, you want to enjoy natural bamboo shoots."
Reimu:"And you, Yukari?"
Yukari:"I'm hoping" "we get to meet like this again." "But sleep a little longer for now..."

16
Yukari:"I'm sorry"

Thanks for the translate :)

http://www.mediafire.com/?wbjj2zyqw3q

There you go, first time edit!

>>37495

Congrats on your first edit.

However, the pages need leveling and the font is a little jagged.

This page (14) is a good example, see how you can tell where the area you cleaned is darker than the rest of the page? What leveling does is make the areas that are meant to be black, well... black and white areas, white.

Check out this site for some tips on leveling under Cleaning -> Level,
http://www.unblessed.net/guide/main.html

If you need any extra advice, just drop a line here.

Is SierraJK still working on this?

>>39932
Stickers, if you're up for editing, you can do it. I don't think Sierra is around.

>>40179
Whoo~

Finished.
http://www.mediafire.com/?j2cvcp3bynfefih

I'm not certain if you posted this looking for a quality check, but I assumed you had and so went over it a little. ^^;

Page 004 - It's a minor pet peeve of mine when word balloons that separate an ongoing statement don't have some sort of punctuation bridge, but the speaker's statement could use a comma after "walk" regardless.

Page 006, panel 2 - ...evening, Reimu.

panel 4 - More importantly,

Page 012, panel 4 - ...who's going,

Page 014, panel 3 - And you, Yukari?

That's all I could spot, the grammar police in me coming out. Thank you~!

>>40501
When somebody post a finished link, that basically means "I'm finished and can someone check this?"

Also, what's wrong with saying, "Good evening Reimu.", than "Evening Reimu."?

>>40598
Forgot the link.
http://www.mediafire.com/?by4gjgqhb5wbn1b

>>40598

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to say you should shorten the line, I was being lazy and only typing a part of the line. Several months back, I'd seen another q. checker here shorten lines using an ellipsis in the same manner, and I was duplicating that. There's no reason I can tell not to use the full "good morning." Apologies again for the misunderstanding.

>>40627
Actually my bad for not noticing what you were doing there. :p
http://www.mediafire.com/?vd2e9s5cwu1bdc5

>>40638
Stickers, you've got some weird aliasing going on on >>6240 with the text.

Also, same issue as the other one. Credits and resave the pages please.

And finished this one also. Again, check for any grammar/spelling that might of slipped by.

http://www.mediafire.com/?debzvnrka0j67

>>41101
Spelling and grammar are fine on a casual read. Image quality on the other hand needs tweaking.

The pages are a bit dirty to begin. Just needs a little white leveling (250 should be enough) and resaved into png or higher level jpg if it isn't already.

Also, resave the back cover. There's some weird discoloration going on there.

I think you need to translate the prose conversation on the last page. I don't understand the story as it is now.

18
Dream x Reality
Maribel:"Renko, I've been thinking about your eyes."
Renko:"Oh?"
Maribel:"I mean, being able to tell time and position by looking at the stars and the moon. It's an unusual talent."
Renko:"You're one to talk, Mary. Anyway, what about it?"
Maribel:"You must have some vast ability to calculate behind them."
Renko:"What, all precisely measuring and calculating just by looking?"
Maribel:"Hey, it could help with our research if you found more uses."
Renko:"Come on, we have computers for that stuff."
Maribel:"Too bad. If you tried, you might even figure out the river's depth..."

Let's see, does this thing allow for spoiler tags?
[spoiler]SHAMEIMARU[/spoiler]

Guess not. But it hardly matters here, so I'll post it anyway.

>>41259
You know how there was a reboot from the PC98 days? I forget if conflict, disturbances, or unusual activity in general were required for Gensokyo to maintain itself. But even from a gaming series standpoint, if everything settles down, it becomes ripe for a reboot.

"[ZUN] doesn’t consider Touhou as a series, since to him that carries a connotation of shoving out another new game with the same title just to gain sales."
There are many "end of Gensokyo" scenarios, but this one is the most likely. One day, a different installment, and the current continuity was all but a dream.

DLink: http://www.mediafire.com/?syxz48zza5rzjld

Archived: http://www.touhouwiki.net/wiki/CYTOKINE_(comics)#Dream_x_Reality_(2007-05-20)