P. 7
What are you saying Ran -> What are you saying[,] Ran

P. 12
Parent's marriage -> [Parents'] marriage

P. 14
Jewel-like accessory called Soul Gem -> Jewel-like accessory called [a] Soul Gem

Even if your body is hurt -> Even if your body is hurt[,]

If you use magic too much -> If you use magic too much[,]

P. 16
One of thse witches -> One of [those] witches

Keeping something from me -> Keeping something from me[,]

Did she out the glasses -> Did she [take out/off] the glasses (Not sure if this is a valid change or not since I'm not looking at the raw alongside the script.)

For starters then -> For starters then[,]

P. 21
That's too bad -> That's too bad[,]

It really hut a lot -> It really [hurt] a lot

P. 24
And what you mean by -> And what [do] you mean by

P. 29
It doesn't sense -> It doesn't [make] sense

P. 30
In becoming a witch -> In becoming a witch[,]

Hid it from me -> Hid it from me[,]

P. 31
There would be no darkness -> [And] there would be no darkness

And thus -> And thus[,]

Something like "9 of 10 is a lie" Something like "9 [out] of 10 is a lie"

Bu some things you told we true -> [But] some things you told [me were] true

P. 33
The "I you keep something from me -> The "[If] you keep something from me[,]

P. 34
And dead a the same time -> And dead [at] the same time

P. 35
Byy bye -> [Bye] bye

P. 36
And at in the end -> And in the end[,] (Drop "at".)

Take long to breakfast -> Take long [for] breakfast